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The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in four countries in 2008.

主體分段方法：按照 <國家> 分段

主體1：India、Vietnam（化石燃料占主導）

主體2：Sweden、Morocco（水里發(fā)電占主導）

開頭段

The pie charts compare the proportions of electricity generated from fossil fuels, hydropower and nuclear power in India, Sweden, Morocco and Vietnam in 2008.

概述段

Overall,India and Vietnamderived most of their electricity fromfossil fuels,whilehydropower wasthe primary sourcein the other two countries. Nuclear power,by contrast,played only a minor rolein all countries except Sweden.

思路要點：

- India、Vietnam的化石燃料發(fā)電占最大比重，Sweden、Morocco的水力發(fā)電占最大比重

- 除Sweden外大多數(shù)國家核能發(fā)電占比都極低

Body paragraph 1

Among the two countries that relied primarily on fossil fuels, Indiarecorded the highest proportion, with fossil fuelsaccounting for82% of electricity generation,significantly higher than56% in Vietnam.In comparison, hydropowerrepresented44% of its electricity production in Vietnam,compared withonly 14% in India. Nuclear energyconstitutedthe remaining 4% in India,whileVietnam generated no electricity from this source.

思路要點：India、Vietnam

- India、Vietnam中化石燃料占比都最大，在India占比82%，遠高于Vietnam的56%

- Vietnam的水力發(fā)電相對較高（44%），India水力發(fā)電僅為14%

- India的核能發(fā)電占比4%，Vietnam不使用核能發(fā)電

Body paragraph 2

In the remaining hydropower-dominated countries, Moroccogenerated the vast majority ofits electricity from hydropower (95%),leaving fossil fuels to account forjust 5%. Swedenexhibited a similar pattern, with hydropowerrepresenting52% of its electricity generation,followed bynuclear power (44%). Fossil fuel was alsothe least common source,making up4% of the total energy supply.

思路要點：Morocco，Sweden

- Morocco和Sweden中都是水力發(fā)電占比最大

- Morocco：水力發(fā)電占絕大部分（95%），但化石燃料發(fā)電占比僅為5%

- Sweden：呈現(xiàn)類似規(guī)律，hydro power占比最大（52%），核能排第二（44%）；化石燃料占比最低，僅為4%