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The table below shows the temporary migrant workers in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006.

主體分段方法：按照 <國家> 分段

主體1：United States、New Zealand

主體2：Australia、United Kingdom

開頭段

The table compares the numbers of temporary migrant workers in Australia, New Zealand, the United Kingdom and the United States in 2003 and 2006, together with the proportion of such workers per 1,000 people in 2006.

概述段

Overall, all four countries experienced a rise in temporary migrant workers, with the US recording the highest figures in both years. However, Oceanian countries registered higher rates of such workers in 2006.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- 四個(gè)國家臨時(shí)工人數(shù)都上升

- US臨時(shí)移民工人數(shù)兩年都最高

- 澳洲國家臨時(shí)移民工人比例相對較高

Body paragraph 1

The US and New Zealand showed contrasting patterns.The US recorded 577,000 temporary migrant workers in 2003, rising to 678,000 in 2006. Despite this, it had the lowest proportion of such workers, at just 2.3 per 1,000 people. In contrast, New Zealand had the smallest number of migrant workers throughout the given period, although its figure rose sharply from 65,000 in 2003 to 87,000 in 2006, representing the most dramatic increase among the four countries. It also had the highest proportion of temporary labor migrants, at 21.1 per 1,000 people.

思路要點(diǎn)：US，New Zealand

- US：2003年臨時(shí)移民工人數(shù)量為577,000→2006年顯著上升到678,000；但比例最低（2.3）

- New Zealand：臨時(shí)移民工人數(shù)量始終最低，從2003年的65,000急劇上升到2006年的87,000，上漲幅度最顯著；比例最高（21.1）

Body paragraph 2

Australia and the UK recorded similar numbers of temporary migrant workers in 2003, at 152,000 and 137,000 respectively. Three years later, both countries experienced a noticeable growth, rising to 219,000 and 266,000 respectively. Regarding the proportion of such workers, Australia ranked second in 2006 (10.7 per 1,000 people), more than twice the figure in the UK.

思路要點(diǎn)：Australia, UK

- 2003年：Australia和UK臨時(shí)移民工人數(shù)量相似，Australia為152,000，UK為137,000

- 2006年：兩個(gè)國家都經(jīng)歷了顯著上升，分別達(dá)到219,000和266,000

- Australia在2006年臨時(shí)移民工人比例排第二(10.7), 約為UK的兩倍多